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雅思流程图范文:商品生产及反馈的过程

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情报圈的第7篇小作文范文解析

流程图

The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is fed back to earlier stages to enable adjustment.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process shown.
» You should write at least 150 words.
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1.题目大意
图片显示了一个商品被设计制造的过程,以及在调研、测试、售卖过程中通过信息反馈来改进商品的流程。写一份报告描述这个流程。

2.高分范文示例
开始段 - 改写题目:
The flow chart depicts the procedure of manufacture of consumer goods,and meanwhile illustrates the process of flow of information feedback.

主体段-1:manufacture process 生产流程
The manufacture process mainly comprises 8 steps. The first stage is to combine raw materials with manufactured components and then stored in the storage,after which the production planning begins, which is facilitated by the product research and then design. When this stages is accomplished, the next involves assembly,inspection and testing. Once finished, the products are packaged and dispatched,so as to be available for sales.

主体段-2:information feedback 信息反馈的过程
Several steps related to information feedback can be noticed during the manufacturing. The first stage involving feedback is the production planning,which gives information to the storage and also affected the data of final sales. The sales result also influences the market research, which provides crucial information to the style of package, advertising content and the designing of products. It is also noticeable that the design of commercials also takes the testing results into consideration.

结尾段
Overall, the whole manufacturing production can be divided into two main procedures:the production of the goods and its marketing,with several information feedback being essential to some of key steps.




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