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托福写作备考--托福写作教育类话题:合作式学习

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   托福写作备考--托福写作教育类话题:合作式学习
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托福写作的备考除了积累词汇以及平时多写写之外,老师认为如果能多积累一些素材也是非常不错的。这里为大家整理了一些托福写作的素材,希望可以帮助到大家。
托福写作教育类话题之合作式学习
Share: Cooperative Learning
Working together on project teams and guided by trained teachers, students learn the skills of collaborating, managing emotions, and resolving conflicts in groups. Each member of the team is responsible for learning the subject matter as well ashelping teammates to learn. Cooperative learning develops social and emotional skills, providing a valuable foundation for their lives as workers, family members, and citizens.
Reality Check: In Eeva Reeder's tenth-grade geometry class at Mountlake Terrace High School, near Seattle, student teams design "schools of the future" while mentoring with local architects. They manage deadlines and resolve differences toproduce models, budgets, and reports far beyond what an individual student could accomplish.
新托福写作万能素材重点搭配摘抄:
learn the skills of collaborating, managing emotions, and resolving conflicts :
学习合作、控制情绪、解决分歧等技能
is responsible for :对xx负责
learning the subject matter :学习主题;
helping teammates to learn :帮助同伴学习
develops social and emotional skills :朋友社交和控制情绪技能
providing a valuable foundation for their lives as workers, family members, and citizens:
为将来做员工、家庭成员和市民提供有价值的基础;
manage deadlines and resolve differences :
掌控截止日期和解决分歧
far beyond what an individual student could accomplish:远远超越单个学生所有能成就的;
新托福写作万能素材适用题目:
2011.7.23ML
Do youagree or disagree with the following statement: it is more effective forstudents to work in groupsthan by themselves.
Some people think that it is an important part of a child’seducation to go on a field trip (for example, museums) while other people thinka child’s time is better spent learning in a classroom at school. What is youropinion?

批改中的作文案例:
As the saying goes, ‘If the country does not invest the money on education, it will then have to use it on prison’. That is to say, education is a necessary part for not only families but society. Therefore, what is the more【most】 appropriate way to educate children became a hot topic. Some people advocate children should spend 【time】learning in the classroom, and others go for going on field trip like museums. As far as I am concerned, I value the latter.
First and foremost, learning through fieldtrip aids to improve comprehension of the knowledge. Children who learn through practical activities can get a better understanding about some definitions than the children infused by teacher【those who merely receive knowledge from teachers in a method of carmming】. Take myself for example, I am major【majored】 in programming in the university and I can hardly use the codes well only by listening to the teachers. Occasionally, I have a chance to work in an IT company for a month. During the practical work, I suddenly understand those complex codes and even discover the beauty of them just as the teacher said before. It is the same as the children education. Only by exploring in person, can we understand the knowledge thoroughly.【注意时态问题】
Additionally, learning outside the classroom can broaden children's horizon. When children are exploring by themselves, they can gain more besides the knowledge on textbooks. For example, when children are led to the museum to see the dinosaur fossil, they will both complete the task, and【not only have a better understanding about dinosaurs, but also】 learn more about that era though the process by the way. Furthermore, children may find the charm inside the knowledge during exploring, which is a good way to cultivate children's interest of science.
Admittedly, some people may say going on a field trip is a waste of time, for children may distract【be distracted】from their school study. Let's look at from another angle, things will be quite opposite. According to a survey, children who learn in the classroom for a long time will easily get bored and anxious. And this emotion will have a bad impact on their performance. However, learning through practical activities can kill two birds with one stone--gain knowledge and relief【relieve】their anxiety in the meantime.
To sum up, considering both performance and emotion of the children, I firmly advocate that it is an important part of a child’s education to go on field trip.
1. 文章观点明确,结构完整。
2. 文章结构完整清晰,主题部分是两个平行的分论点加上一个让不段,论证围绕论点进行了详细的展开。
3. 注意基础性语法错误和复杂句表意清晰度。详见批注。
4. 学生的语言运用能力和表达能力一般,能够使用一些复杂句式,句子表意也都比较清晰。平常还有积累高分的词汇和句式并运用到自己的写作当中去。加油。
以上就是老师为大家整理了托福写作素材,希望对大家在托福写作备考时可以积累起来,写作时可以套用。最后,预祝大家托福考试能取得理想的成绩。
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