写作细节七:学术类文章的一些文体注意事项
让我们通过具体的例子来了解此类文章书写和文体的特点
1. N2O wasn't produced until 1990, after which, its production grew rapidly.
雅思文章为正式文体,所以尽量不要出现缩写,wasn't建议写成was not 。
2. The bottles are first divided by color into clear, brown and clear ones which are then was hed by high-pressurised water.
拼写出现问题。在雅思写作中,英式和美式拼写都接受,但我们还是尽量做到两者不混淆。如or和our,se和ze。or和ze为美式拼写,而our和se为英式拼写。
3. Nowadays, more and more people have private cars.
more and more词汇过于简单,我们可以用an increasing number of来替代。
4. Let all of us make great efforts to construct a more civilised China!
此句子喊口号,抒发情感。雅思大作文为议论文,不需要任何形式的情感抒发和口号,所以这句话不适合这样的语言环境。